Talk:Vår Ulla låg i sängen och sov/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 10:55, 25 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Will get to this soon. AryKun (talk) 10:55, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:02, 25 January 2022 (UTC)


 * The infobox title is wrong.
 * Fixed.
 * "1773-1776" (in infobox) → en-dash
 * Fixed.
 * The lead is very short, you could incorporate some more of the reception and what the song is about.
 * Good idea, done.
 * Maybe put the audio file in the infobox.
 * No thanks! I think it is always best in the 'Music' section.
 * "Swedish song tradition" → "Swedish ballad tradition"
 * Fixed.
 * "influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"
 * It means from within, it's not an external influence.
 * "1712 or 1713 – 1767" → Should the spaces be there?
 * It seems best to me, as the range possibly includes 1712 here.
 * Rococo is capitalized in its article.
 * Fixed.
 * Ref 5 link is broken.
 * The Bellman Society site seems to be infected by a virus, I'm sure it'll be back soon, but I've added an archive link and marked it as 'dead' for now.

– Thanks for the review! All done to date.Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)