Talk:Valentine's Day (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Looking nice so far. Some suggestions for improvement:
 * Unbold quotes around episode title.
 * Done -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Written by Michael Schur, and directed by Greg Daniels -- no need for comma here.
 * Removed -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Maybe mention something about reception in the lead, and give a brief overview of the plot.
 * Done -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Jan kisses him then groans -- "and then"; 'then' by itself is not a conjunction.
 * Changed -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * No need to wikilink Greg Daniels in the second paragraph of Production, it's linked just above.
 * Fixed -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * The writers didn't have a punchline in the scene -- avoid contractions; "did not".
 * Done -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * The whole section about the Dwight bobbleheads should probably be moved from Production to Reception -- it's the fans' reaction, no?
 * Moved -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Link Television Without Pity.
 * Linked -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * The OfficeTally.com poll should go, per WP:MOSTV.
 * Removed -- Mr.crabby    (Talk)   23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Otherwise, looking good. You've got a week to make changes, so good luck. — 97198   talk  06:36, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Awesome. I'm happy to go ahead and promote to GA status. — 97198   talk  00:35, 16 August 2008 (UTC)