Talk:Valley of Childish Things

Peer review
Lead: I think the lead has a lot of useful information included in it. I just think that maybe the wording on the last phrase of the sentence could be improved slightly. Maybe remove "when to decide".

Summary:

You did a great job of explaining this short story which I found to be very confusing when I first reading it. Summary was easy to follow and provide a good amount of detail.

Biography:

I think this was a nice touch because I'm assuming you couldn't find any critical analysis of this really short story. I really enjoy your inclusion of her purpose for writing. Knechthouse (talk) 08:42, 6 December 2022 (UTC)