Talk:Van Gogh's family in his art

Lede
I don't understand these sentences in the lede they seem contradictory: ''Vincent often felt divided from his family, particularly regarding religion. For the family members he remained close, sharing his love for them in his art.'' I think they need re-wording...Modernist (talk) 11:23, 18 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Very good point. How is: "Although Vincent often felt removed from his family, once he hit his stride artistically and made work his family members enjoyed, he shared his love for them through his art."--From Carole Henson 08:35, 18 May 2011


 * Just realized that item was from me, but I forgot to sign it. Since it was mine, and there were no further comments I'll check and edit if needed.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 06:28, 7 September 2014 (UTC)

Update on scrubbing
I've scrubbed the copyvio/plagiarism through the first para of the Anna (Vincent's mother) section. More is needed. I'm unwatching this now, but will come back to check the progress. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 14:01, 30 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I came here for research about writing about families and saw this talk section. I see that there was some editing on June 30, 2011... thanks.


 * Since this time I've learned about the dupe checker - and I see that there are some minor changes that could be made for the Memoir 1 source based on this comparison and some copy editing opportunities.


 * Is this article still considered to have close-paraphrasing issues? If so, I'll run dup checker on all the sources and edit accordingly.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 06:52, 7 September 2014 (UTC)