Talk:Van Ness Bus Rapid Transit/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Truflip99 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Will start soon. --truflip99 (talk) 18:12, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Lead


 * Put "(BRT)" after the first instance of "bus rapid transit" and use "BRT" from there
 * "Van Ness Avenue thoroughfare" is redundant
 * comma after "Lombard Street"
 * "Streetcar service on Van Ness Avenue began in 1915" --> Public transit on Van Ness Avenue began with streetcar service in 1915
 * link ballot measure
 * "Streetcar service on Van Ness Avenue began in 1915" --> Public transit on Van Ness Avenue began with streetcar service in 1915
 * link ballot measure
 * link ballot measure
 * link ballot measure

Infobox
 * Should you be using Infobox rail line tp?
 * Infobox bus line is designed for individual bus routes; Infobox rail line has a better parameter set for infrastructure like this project.

Design
 * – 47 Van Ness and 49 Van Ness-Mission – use em dash
 * Per MOS:ENDASH, spaced en dashes are fine here.
 * is bus 47 still suspended? not clear
 * Clarified at the bottom of the table
 * FTA needs to be spelled out and linked at first instance
 * Link trolleybus first instance
 * Commission authorized a budget of US$815,000 -- omit "US"
 * No mention of "BRT creep" in sources provided
 * ✅ reworded
 * In some cases, Muni have -- has?
 * No mention of "BRT creep" in sources provided
 * ✅ reworded
 * In some cases, Muni have -- has?

more later. --truflip99 (talk) 18:49, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

History
 * Link bond issue
 * omit US from US$
 * and for its row of dealerships -- perhaps clarify dealerships of what?
 * and for its row of dealerships -- perhaps clarify dealerships of what?
 * and for its row of dealerships -- perhaps clarify dealerships of what?

Source Source spot checks checked out.

Great work! --truflip99 (talk) 23:19, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I believe I've addressed all your comments. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 00:49, 19 August 2022 (UTC)