Talk:Vanilla Chocolat

Vanilla Chocolat contains only the "Live Performance and criticism" from http://surf.selekweb.com/index.php?q=aHR0cDovL2VuLndpa2lwZWRpYS5vcmcvd2lraS9DaGVycnlfUG9w, because Cherry Pop and Vanilla Chocolat were performed together on Vocea Romaniei.
 * That page is a mirror of our article on Cherry Pop anyway, so no copyvio. Crow  Caw  19:18, 7 June 2015 (UTC)

Comments
Hi. I prefer to leave comments, which you requested, on the article talk page. Here are some:


 * Titles of songs should have double quote marks, while albums should be in italics. I've done it myself, already. See MOS:QUOTEMARKS. --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)


 * The inline citations on non controversial information in the lead may be removed. Please ensure however that the same information is found in the main body and is properly cited. See WP:LEADCITE. --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)


 * I suggest that you incorporate the blockquotes to the main prose. There's is an imbalance, having huge quotes and leaving the main prose with almost nothing. --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)


 * There's no discussion of the musical aspect of the song, therefore ensure that the use of "audio" from a copyrighted work is fair. Per Non-free content criteria, "Non-free content is used only if its presence would significantly increase readers' understanding of the article topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding." --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)


 * The line "They also praised the music video, calling it "very creative" and "highly recommended", noting that it keeps in line with the "selfie trend"." should be under the section "Music video". The critical response section should be for the song only. --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)


 * For names of websites or anything without an article in Wikipedia, I suggest that they should be identified as such. --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * ❌ What do you mean? ✅
 * Please disregard. I think adding .com will suffice. --Efe (talk) 11:49, 5 December 2015 (UTC)

These are my comments, for now. --Efe (talk) 10:18, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * What do you mean with the last sentence? --Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:33, 10 November 2015 (UTC)