Talk:Vanilla Chocolat/GA3

GA Review
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Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:02, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * What do you mean by "being vanilla-coloured" in the alt box? Could this possibly be reworded?
 * Remove the flat list from the genre; there's only one genre listed
 * Remove the flat list form the producer; there's only one producer listed

Lead

 * Remove the space before the link to Romanian
 * Change 'sophomore' to 'second'
 * Remove the reference as you do not need one in the lead
 * Remove 'herself' from the listing of writers involved with the track
 * Remove 'alone' from the listing of writers involved with the track
 * Remove the mention of 5 million views for the music video
 * Remove the video comparison to "Selfie en Paris"
 * Change 'Everything Express' into 'Musical critics'
 * Change 'Hitfire' to 'others'
 * Again, remove the reference
 * Overall, I feel this lead could be significantly reworded

Background and recording

 * Remove the second 's' in '26-seconds' in the description of the included audio
 * Again, remove 'herself' and 'alone' from the first sentence
 * Remove 'the' immediately before 'Fonogram Studios'
 * The reftitle is a bit too long for the source after "like on [her] second studio album."
 * I think 'commended' sounds like a weird word choice since she's describing her own song

Critical response

 * I think this section should be renamed 'Critical reception'
 * Include a topic sentence, stating that the song received generally positive reviews upon release
 * You list two completely different sources for the same quote, so this needs to be fixed and/or removed
 * You keep using 'they', but not clarifying who 'they' is
 * The '[...]' in the quotes needs to be formatted correctly to Wikipedia standards
 * Possible expansion of this section would be appreciated as well

Live performances

 * This should be moved below 'Music video'
 * Combine the first two sentences
 * Combine the sentences discussing her performances on Pro FM radio
 * Italicize 'The Voice'
 * Again, Italicize 'The Voice' or replace with 'the program'

Music video

 * Add a space before 'A selfie video...'
 * Link 'selfie' in the lead sentence
 * Combine the sentences discussing some of the television shows she filmed the video on
 * The reftitle could be shortened perhaps in the source involving plagiarism accusations
 * The last sentence doesn't seem too necessary; if you want to keep it, I'd suggest adding more video reviews/reception towards the video

Credits and personnel

 * Looks good!

Track listings

 * The Spanish/Turkish/Polish download box needs to have proper spaces used

End of GA Review:
Good article, but it definitely needs to be put on hold for now. There are mistakes that need to be visited before GA consideration. Gimme a holler when any updating has taken place. Carbrera (talk) 01:07, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Carbrera, I've adressed everything above besides the expansion of some of the article's topics, as I couldn't find any other reliable source out there. Thanks! Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:49, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I think this article is probably one of the better ones out there when it comes to Alexandra Stan-related topics. Thanks for your contributions to the article and your cooperation. Carbrera (talk) 15:32, 6 March 2016 (UTC)