Talk:Vanilla Ice/GA1

GA Review
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Specific issues

 * "According to Van Winkle, Knight took Van Winkle out on the balcony by himself, and implied that he would throw Van Winkle off the balcony unless Van Winkle signed the rights to the song over to Knight." Van Winkle speaking about him in third person is very weird and repetitive, please rewrite.
 * "According to Van Winkle, SBK paid Van Winkle him to adopt a more commercial, conventional appearance."


 * "Allmusic reviewer Steve Huey wrote that "Ice's mic technique is actually stronger and more nimble than MC Hammer's, and he really tries earnestly to show off the skills he does have. Unfortunately, even if he can keep a mid-tempo pace, his flow is rhythmically stiff, and his voice has an odd timbre; plus, he never seems sure of the proper accent to adopt. He's able to overcome those flaws somewhat in isolated moments, but they become all too apparent over the course of an entire album."" According MOS:QUOTE, this paragraph should be organized as follows:

[...] Criticizing the technique and style of Vanilla Ice, Allmusic reviewer Steve Huey wrote:

"Ice's mic technique is actually stronger and more nimble than MC Hammer's, and he really tries earnestly to show off the skills he does have. Unfortunately, even if he can keep a mid-tempo pace, his flow is rhythmically stiff, and his voice has an odd timbre; plus, he never seems sure of the proper accent to adopt. He's able to overcome those flaws somewhat in isolated moments, but they become all too apparent over the course of an entire album."


 * "Rob Kemp gave the album one out of five stars, calling the album "utterly listless"." Rob Kemp from?


 * You will not talk about the participation of Vanilla Ice in the movies Da Hip Hop Witch (2000), The New Guy (2002), The Helix...Loaded (2005), and The Bros. (2006)?

You have a period of seven days to make all corrections and add details that seems to be missing.--  C  anniba loki  00:09, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
 * All of my concerns have been adressed and/or explained. Congratulations!--  C  anniba loki  16:19, 3 May 2009 (UTC)