Talk:Vanuatu at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 00:49, 24 May 2012 (UTC)

Hello! I will begin reviewing this article as soon as possible!--Dom497 (talk) 00:49, 24 May 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * The quality of the article is good.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Please see below. Issues fixed.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * Everything looks good for this section of the review.
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * All statements have at least one reference.
 * C. No original research:
 * No original research found.
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * The article covers all major aspects of the topic.
 * B. Focused:
 * The article stays on topic.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * No bias found.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * Article is stable.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * All images used in the article are tagged properly.
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Images are used where possible.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * PASS!!!--Dom497 (talk) 18:44, 25 May 2012 (UTC)

Comments
Everything in the article is great. I just have 2 suggestions that should be taken into consideration before I pass the article.

--Dom497 (talk) 19:04, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Under the athletic section of the article, above the table it says Mens, but there is a women event in the table. This needs to be fixed.
 * I removed the titles "Mens", and for consistency's sake, the "Womens" on the next event. It should be all set. --Starstriker7(Talk) 01:11, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
 * For reference #2, why isn't it in the " {{cite web|url=..." form? This should be fixed before I pass the article.
 * I formatted it without the Cite web format because when I set it up, the result (for some reason) refused to connect to the actual URL. Once I placed the actual reference in Cite web format. it ended up looking something like "[www.sportingpulse.com/get_file.cgi?id=591528 "2008 VASANOC Annual Report"]. Vanuatu Association of Sports and National Olympic Committee. 2008. Retrieved 26 April 2012." I could add in the retrieval date, however, which I seemed to have forgotten. --Starstriker7(Talk) 01:11, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for doing this review. I have addressed the first comment. Hopefully my answer to the second is sufficient, but let me know if there are alternate solutions to be had. --Starstriker7{{sup|(Talk)}} 01:11, 25 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Weird...I tried fixing the problem using different formats for the reference on my sandbox but nothing worked...--Dom497 (talk) 18:43, 25 May 2012 (UTC)