Talk:Vegan Outreach

Tone of article
Its a good, detailed article, but perhaps a bit too detailed when it comes to things like naming every employee, as if the world needs/wants to know this. It makes it look like a VO person wrote it (which, not meaning to be unkind, they probably did!) and overall lowers the encyclopedic tone. Trimming it down a bit would improve the readability and gravitas.

IceDragon64 (talk) 22:11, 4 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I agree. Talking about the founders with first names ("Matt" did this and "Joe" did that), and saying the organization is growing "by leaps and bounds", makes it read like the organization's press release. Not quarreling with the content of the article, just the tone. I'm going to add a Template:Newsrelease tag to the talk page (not to the article itself--I don't think the tone problems are that bad). -- Narsil (talk) 19:59, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

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