Talk:Vegetable chip/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 03:48, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the issues below addressed, the article now complies with MOS policies concerning grammar as well as general layout/structure. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:07, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
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: The article is very well-cited, and uses a sizable number of reputable sources. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:24, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
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: The article seems to cover all relevant aspects of its topic for which reliable information could be found. No cruft or anything unnecessary incorporated, either. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:23, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
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. The article's content remains consistently neutral throughout. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:21, 10 April 2016 (UTC) . Since as far back as last May, at least, there have been no disruptive fluctuations in the article content, by way of edit warring or otherwise. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:06, 3 April 2016 (UTC) : All images used in this article serve relevant illustrative purposes. All are accepted by the Wikimedia Commons, so there are no fair use-related concerns. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:05, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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Comments

 * Introduction: Isn't it redundant to say, "A variety of various root vegetables or..."?
 * Rw to: "Many various root vegetables or leaf vegetables are used". North America1000 10:01, 10 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Preparation and ingredients: Where "heart-healthy olive oil" is mentioned, does the olive oil need to be included in the quotations for any reason?
 * I rewrote it to read: ""heart-healthy" olive oil", with quotes only around "heart-healthy". North America1000 10:14, 10 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Brands and companies: Where it lists the Uprooted brand varieties, ie., Sweet potatoes and Sweet potatoes, beets and parsnips; has sweet potatoes been listed twice, or is the latter mentioning part of a combination? I can't access the source, and it's a little hard to tell as worded. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:04, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 * The first variety is just Sweet potatoes, and the second is Sweet potatoes, beets and parsnips. To clarify this, I rewrote it to read: "As of February 2016, Kettle Foods produces the Uprooted brand of vegetable chips in a Sweet potatoes variety and a Sweet potatoes, beets and parsnips variety." North America1000 10:09, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:04, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

The article now qualifies as GA - well worth the wait, I should hope. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:08, 10 April 2016 (UTC)