Talk:Venezuelan refugee crisis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Atsme (talk · contribs) 11:04, 13 June 2019 (UTC)

Discussion
, the copyvio issue needs your immediate attention. Thank you. Atsme Talk 📧 11:48, 13 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Should be fixed now. Many of the potential copyvios were quotes, but I attributed them to The New York Times in a more proper manner. Let me know if you have further concerns.ZiaLater ( talk ) 13:39, 13 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Please see WP:INTEXT - you still have to cite the sources. According to Earwig, the majority of quotes are from the same source, and that's pushing the copyvio envelope. See the Earwig results, choose a couple you feel are most relevant. Also, you can't add to or alter a quote as you did when adding "[number]" to the quote. Instead of using so many direct quotes, use your own words with an inline citation and avoid close paraphrasing. Also, there's a "split" discussion still pending; therefore, the article cannot be reviewed until after those 2 major issues have been resolved. I'm going to put the review on hold for 7 days to give you a chance to resolve the split discussion and fix the copyvio issues and inline citations. Atsme Talk 📧 14:45, 13 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the details. I will take a look at what you said and make the necessary changes.ZiaLater ( talk ) 10:18, 14 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Ok, the unnecessary quotes in the body were removed. The two remaining quotes are seen in quote boxes. Other potential copyvios flagged include "the Central University of Venezuela" and "the Dutch Caribbean Coast Guard", both of which are proper nouns. Let me know if there are additional concerns and thanks for helping with this process.ZiaLater ( talk ) 10:36, 14 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Apparently, a move is about to take place? Atsme Talk 📧 17:05, 18 June 2019 (UTC)


 * The move was necessary due to the concern about the name. The "Bolivarian diaspora" was the term mainly used in the later years of the Chávez administration. The "crisis" is the wording used for the current event since there is not a specific naming designation. In short, the "Bolivarian diaspora" was the precursor to the current "crisis". Hope this clears it up.ZiaLater ( talk ) 19:02, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
 * No problem. Still a bit of clean-up editing to be done - I see the name change happened. I'll give it a few more days. Atsme Talk 📧 20:04, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

Any recommendations now that the split occurred?ZiaLater ( talk ) 12:48, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, ZiaLater - will get back on it soon, maybe even today...haven't forgotten - just giving things a little time to settle down. I've also been a bit preoccupied reading all the 'scurry' caused by recent developments.Atsme Talk 📧 13:07, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
 * , check the New segments in the prose section. Get those 2 issues fixed & I'll wrap it up. Atsme Talk 📧 04:15, 7 July 2019 (UTC)

Alright, I have made the fixes. Let me know if you have any other concerns and thank you for your help!<i style="text-shadow:#C0C0C0 0.2em 0.2em 0.2em; color: ForestGreen">ZiaLater</i> ( talk ) 22:09, 7 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ZiaLater - I used the expand ref tool - consider using it in the future - it's awesome. Good job on the article - it is very informative. <span style="text-shadow:#F8F8FF 0.2em 0.2em 0.4em,#F4BBFF -0.2em -0.3em 0.6em,#BFFF00 0.8em 0.8em 0.6em;color:#A2006D">Atsme  Talk 📧 22:45, 7 July 2019 (UTC)