Talk:Venice Queen

Chris Rock used the first part of this song in his 2004 Never Scared.
SOmebody mention it in the article please...

thanks —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 200.126.74.55 (talk) 01:12, 8 March 2007 (UTC).

Factually inaccurate and poorly written
There are numerous assertions made in the article which are either false, doubtful or unclear. Examples: "The song has a ... guitar outro, in a different style and melody"; "He doesn't speak in metaphors here". The entire section concerned with the structure of the song is vague and unhelpful; this is mainly down to poor usage of musical terminology.

The lyrics should not be discussed in the same paragraph as the backstory. Almost without exception the discussion of the lyrics is inappropriate, littered with grammatical errors ("The songs has..."), NPOV violations ("beautiful, caring, direct lyrics"), opinion presented as fact ("he describes how it feels to be in and out the rehab clinic and how tough it is to fight against the drug addiction") and general stylistic mishaps ("how tough it is to fight against the drug addiction" - tone too informal? too figurative?). In short, a complete rewrite is needed if, indeed, the article should even exist. 130.88.85.111 13:06, 26 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Per WP:MUSIC is shouldn't exist as it isn't a notable song. I will redirect the article to By the Way in a few days if there are no objections made. Tooga - BØRK! 00:10, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

WikiProject class rating
This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot 10:54, 10 November 2007 (UTC)