Talk:Venom/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 23:03, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review tomorrow. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 23:03, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Two paragraphs are in the lede, although MOS:LEADLENGTH states that it should have at least three in this case. I would prefer the addition of another paragraph, if possible of course.
 * Extended.
 * Rest of it is alright, the Dorland's Medical Dictionary source can stay since it describes the definition, which seems to be only stated in the first sentence.
 * Noted.
 * Ion channel toxins is linked with a category that contains a list of those toxins. I'm not sure if this is standard practice, I would prefer to change it to Ion channel.
 * Done.
 * Uncapitalize Black widow.
 * Done.
 * "and centipedes, which use forcipules, modified legs, to deliver venom..." → and centipedes, which use forcipules and modified legs to deliver venom...
 * No, the forcipules are the modified legs, which is why there are commas around the gloss.
 * Oh okay!
 * "...deliver venom into their targets." → Isn't it supposed to say delivers?
 * '[the] spines ... deliver' is correct, 3rd person plural.
 * There seems to be no copyvio issues. The first link though is straight-up copy-pasted text from this page. Besides that, everything seems to be alright.
 * They copied from Wikipedia. The Tumgir.com page is from 2021; the Wikipedia text was substantially the same back in 2019.

Photos

 * All are alright. A good amount is present for the size of this article.