Talk:Ventnor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ykraps (talk · contribs) 11:43, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

I gave this a thorough review in April, see Peer review/Ventnor/archive1 and haven't really left myself much more to say. But here goes...

History

 * "...during both the Iron Age and early Roman periods" - As the Iron 'Age' is already defined as a period, shouldn't the sentence read, "...during both the Iron Age and early Roman period" (singular)?


 * Does St Catherines Point have an apostrophe? St. Catherine's Point seems to think so but then it also has a full stop after St, and that's contrary to MOS.

Geography

 * The link Flowers Brook doesn't go anywhere useful. Probably best to remove.


 * St. Catherine's now has an apostrophe and a full stop. Whatever the spelling, it should be consistent. My choice would be St Catherine's but up to you.

Climate

 * Remove link from St Catherine's Point and add to the first mention in the History section.

Wildlife

 * Add a link to subtidal.

Demography

 * EU - write out in full (European Union) on first mention, and link.

Landmarks

 * "...St Boniface Down is just a kilometre north of and high above the town"' - This seems ambiguous to me. Is it also 1km high? If not, perhaps switch it to say, high above and 1km north of the town. (Just a suggestion)
 * I don't think esplanade needs capitals and in fact you have used it later uncapitalised. Also link on the first mention only. Unless you are making the point that that is its proper name. In which case, I would, at the first mention, say ''...will be familiar to many visitors. It is backed by an esplanade (uncapitalised and linked), then there after refer to it as the Esplanade (capitalised). (again, a suggestion)

Education

 * link three-tier
 * Not sure 'special school' is this week's PC term. I don't think the term is widely understood outside the UK either. Perhaps being more specific could help here? A school for (learning difficulties/autistic/physically handicapped), perhaps?

Notable people

 * " Karl Marx rented a house at 1 Saint Boniface Gardends" - Is this a typo? (Gardens?)

General
Throughout, there are a lot of measurements given which would benefit from a conversion template.