Talk:Venus (Lady Gaga song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 06:25, 23 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * The song also includes a sample from the French → The recording also includes a sample from French
 * album, Interstellar Low Ways (1966). Sun Ra was thus given a co-writing → album, Interstellar Low Ways (1966), thus receiving a co-writing
 * I wrote it a little differently.
 * after the positive reception → following the positive reception
 * four hooks and references → four hooks, and references
 * same named planet → same-named planet
 * Three different artworks were done by Steven Klein → Three accompanying artworks were designed for the single by Steven Klein
 * but never materialized, instead the track was later used during a sequence in the music video for Artpop's third single, "G.U.Y." → but was never materialized, with the track being later used during a sequence in the music video for Artpop's third single, "G.U.Y." instead.
 * attained moderated success → attained moderate success
 * on charts around the world → on worldwide charts
 * Gaga performed the song → You've already used "song" before; alternate here with "recording"
 * performances happened at → performances occurred at

Infobox

 * One of three covers released alongside the track. → One of the three covers used to digitally commercialize the track.
 * Unlink Lady Gaga the second time

Background and development

 * No full names please
 * her second one → her second record
 * In the meantime Gaga → state "the singer" here for alternation
 * French DJ → French disc jockey
 * the same named → the same-named
 * on a journey... I kinda → ... to [...]
 * groove. (...) This song → (...) to [...]

Recording and composition

 * Madeon noted: "She would → : to ,
 * for the song → alternate here with "track"
 * Madeon and worked on → Madeon, and handled (word rep.)
 * mastered the song → alternate here with "track"
 * delivery is similar → delivery are similar
 * finally it reaches the chorus → finally the chorus is reached
 * euphoria" with Gaga belting the lyrics: "When → euphoria", with Gaga belting the lyrics, "When
 * and the song follows → alternate here with "the recording"

Release and artwork

 * purchase on Monday October 28, 2013 → Stating that it was a Monday is overfluous
 * to the release Gaga release three cover → to the release, the singer unveiled
 * sees Gaga also standing naked → use "her" here for alternation
 * collaborated with Gaga on interludes → alternate with "the singer" here
 * This was followed by a shot → This is followed by a shot

Critical reception

 * describing it as "catchy" → remove "as"
 * positive review to the song → alternate "song" with "track" here
 * commented that with the song packing → commented that, with the song incorporating
 * glittering dance balladry → close the quote from Idolator here.
 * as one of the songs audience can download → as one of the tracks the audience can download
 * gave the song 3 stars out of 5 rating → gave the song a rating of 3 stars out of 5
 * and called the song "almost parodical" → alternate here with "recording"

Chart performance

 * copies of digital downloads → digital copies
 * I would disagree that the verbiage present is correct.
 * Australia and New Zealand respectively → comma before "respectively"
 * of the album pre-order → of the album's pre-order
 * top-ten of the download → the top 10 of the download
 * and top-ten of the main → and the top 10 of the main
 * This enabled the song → alternate here with "track"

Live performances

 * Two weeks later Gaga performed → Set comma before "Gaga"
 * Gaga went barefoot → Alternate with "the singer" here
 * Before starting the performance Gaga announced → comma before "Gaga announced"
 * During the opening for the Lady Gaga and the Muppets' Holiday Spectacular → Remove overfluous "the"
 * coiffured high and wearing a → coiffured high alongside wearing a
 * Gaga also the song on Japanese → The word "sang" is missing in this sentence
 * The song was included on → alternate with "the track"
 * described it: "Gaga did 'Venus' → : to ,

Credits and personnel

 * Unlink Artpop and Lady Gaga here

Charts

 * flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 41.5% is slightly too much! Please look for the first source at the top of the list and reduce the content from it in the article's body

Images and others

 * Images perfectly illustrate the article

Links

 * 1 little problem here! Please fix!

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Good job with the article!! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:02, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 * all done! — I B  [ Poke  ] 14:42, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:09, 25 December 2016 (UTC)