Talk:Venus and the Sun

advert in present tense for future premiere?
This article needs attention.

Note:in English present tense can be ambiguous - I read it as future with regard to the London opening. It should be past tense and the article should not be an advert. Does the film merit an article? A film rated 4.7 at IMDB.com may not be significant. I say that as an amateur astronomer fond of Venus and excited about the 2012 transit of the sun. Regardless, could someone experienced with articles on recent films tackle editing or removing this?

G. Robert Shiplett 20:54, 10 April 2012 (UTC)

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