Talk:Vere Bird Jr./GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 02:42, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:42, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * I'd change portfolio to ministry, just to make it easier on readers.
 * "he was given the portfolio of Aviation," perhaps change to "given the position of.."
 * ✅. I only found one instance of "portfolio," which I have changed to "ministry". A fluffernutter is a sandwich! (talk) 03:26, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
 * "Bird's career in the Cabinet was finally ended by scandal in 1990" take out finally.
 * ✅. A fluffernutter is a sandwich! (talk) 03:26, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

Just those couple small things. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:04, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good, article now passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:29, 22 July 2011 (UTC)