Talk:Vernon Arnold Haugland/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:45, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

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 * Lead
 * Add a short description.

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 * Add a comma after "safely".

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 * Add a comma after "heroism".

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 * Body
 * "he family" "his family"

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 * "Haughland" "Haugland"

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 * "he were starving" "he was starving"

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 * "behind from him" - is "from" necessary?

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 * Add a comma after "fifth day in the jungle".

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 * "a heavy rain" "heavy rain"

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 * "there was rocks falling" "rocks were falling"

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 * "rain storm" should be written as one word.

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 * "cloths" - typo?

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 * "day by day" "day-by-day"

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 * Add a comma after "local tribesmen".

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 * Add a serial comma after The Nation.

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 * "NASA, retirement and death" "NASA, retirement, and death"

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 * #Selected_works need citations for verification.


 * References
 * Wikilink websites/works where possible.
 * Is "Typewriter The Wonderful World of Typewriters" (a Blogspot) reliable?
 * Archive sources (manually or with this automatic tool) where possible.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:24, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:48, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Everything looks great now! Passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:08, 12 July 2021 (UTC)