Talk:Veronica Mars/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvements: Overall, this is a very well done article. Great work! The article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki 311  02:02, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The image in the infobox needs a detailed Non-free use rationale.
 * OK, I stole and adapted the NFUR from Lost. Does that work? Jclemens (talk) 02:49, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually, I fixed the cast picture from season 3, too. Jclemens (talk) 03:04, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * In "Cancellation and future", the FBI concept is mentioned before it is explained. A reader who does not already have knowledge of the concept might be confused by that.
 * Good catch. Rearranged. Jclemens (talk) 03:04, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't Lilly be mentioned in the "Cast and characters"? You could extend the second sentence like so: "Kristen Bell portrayed the titular Veronica Mars, a high school junior and skilled private detective trying to solve the mystery of her murdered best friend Lilly Kane"...or something to that effect. That would make the next sentence make sense, too. Duncan is mentioned as Lilly's brother without informing the reader of who she is.
 * Actually, a better solution would be to move "Season synopses" to before "Production". Then everything is fully explained right off the bat.
 * Moved per your suggestion. Going to go through the article to see if that introduces any new problemns. Jclemens (talk) 02:49, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * So... I think that addresses everything. Can you check it out and let me know if my edits meet your criteria, and let me know what else might need to be done?  Thanks! Jclemens (talk) 03:04, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * All the changes look good. Great work! Pass. Nikki  311  01:22, 9 October 2008 (UTC)