Talk:Verseon

COI tag (November 2021)
User:PaigeCFP seems to have no contributions other than performing an (admittedly fairly professional-looking) copyedit on this article. More attention would be appreciated; I haven't given it more than a cursory look-through. jp×g 04:59, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

A few significant changes were made here to update errors of fact and I should have defended them in the edits but this is my first time as an editor so protocol errors are unintentional I have attempted to amend them using "dummy edits" to explain and also by re-thinking some of my original edits and adding more sources:

1) I removed an article in the first paragraph that was misleading. It said that Verseon was featured as one of the 50 ideas to change the world and this is inaccurate and misleading. Upon reading the article, it seems that someone from Verseon responded to a call for reader submissions for 50 ideas with the potential to change the world and Verseon was included in an article that listed all reader submissions.

2) I updated the London stock exchange numbers from 300 million Pounds to $100 million dollars and added an article to support it.

3) I removed a link to the London stock exchange that no longer had any reference to Verseon.

4) I updated an article that referenced their treatment for macular degeneration that did not mention Verseon.

5) I revised a statement that said no drugs have reached clinical trials when they have one in clinical trials and another that will soon be and provided sources.

PaigeCFP (talk) 05:19, 28 November 2021 (UTC)