Talk:Vettor Pisani-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ceradon (talk · contribs) 17:52, 14 February 2015 (UTC)


 * In the vein of you scratch my back and I'll scratch yours, I'll take this on. Full review should be done a day or two. --ceradon ( talk  •  contribs ) 17:52, 14 February 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Excellent work here. Would be happy to pass.
 * Passing... --ceradon ( talk  •  contribs ) 16:12, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * "Single 40-caliber QF Cannone da 120/40 A Modello 1891 gun was" - please correct the linguistic plurality in this sentence (first sentence in the penultimate paragraph). "A single 40-caliber QF Cannone da 120/40 A Modello 1891 gun was" or "Single 40-caliber QF Cannone da 120/40 A Modello 1891 guns were".
 * "She subsequently became a repair ship in 1916" - Are you talking about Giuseppe Garibaldi or Vettor Pisani? I think the antecedent to the "She" pronoun is the Giuseppe Garibaldi, rather than Vettor Pisani. Could probably say "Vettor Pisani subsequently became".
 * Robinson 1903 needs a title. Did you intend for the journal parameter to be the title parameter?
 * If you click on the help link you'll see that the journal parameter is supposed to act as the title, but only a few days ago, these redlinks started popping up incorrectly. I suspect that somebody started messing around with the template and it hasn't been fixed yet. Nothing I can do about anyways.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:32, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * No disambiguation links found in the article.
 * Images are in the public domain and properly tagged.
 * Thanks for your review; I've fixed everything you identified.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:32, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * "She subsequently became a repair ship in 1916" - Are you talking about Giuseppe Garibaldi or Vettor Pisani? I think the antecedent to the "She" pronoun is the Giuseppe Garibaldi, rather than Vettor Pisani. Could probably say "Vettor Pisani subsequently became".
 * Robinson 1903 needs a title. Did you intend for the journal parameter to be the title parameter?
 * If you click on the help link you'll see that the journal parameter is supposed to act as the title, but only a few days ago, these redlinks started popping up incorrectly. I suspect that somebody started messing around with the template and it hasn't been fixed yet. Nothing I can do about anyways.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:32, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * No disambiguation links found in the article.
 * Images are in the public domain and properly tagged.
 * Thanks for your review; I've fixed everything you identified.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:32, 16 February 2015 (UTC)