Talk:Vibe (Tove Styrke song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:51, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

This article can be reviewed in one day! --K. Peake 07:51, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Why is electronic not listed next to pop in genres under the infobox?
 * Add a comma after third studio album
 * The songwriting and production sentence should be the second of the first para instead
 * "five months after the album's original release." → "five months after the original release."
 * "issued "Vibe" as" → "issued it as"
 * "Musically, "Vibe" is an" → "It is an"
 * "contrary to other Sway tracks" → "contrary to the album's other tracks"
 * ""Vibe" was met with generally positive reviews" → ""Vibe" received generally positive reviews" and add what they praised about it
 * Done the first part, but I don't really know how to summarize the reviews. Do you see a common thread in the reviews? Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)


 * "the single appeared below" → "the song appeared below"
 * "peaking at number ten" → "peaking at number 10" per MOS:NUM
 * Remove pipe on Heatseeker
 * "of the United Kingdom and Nordic legs" → "of the British and Nordic legs" for consistency with the way you refer to these areas
 * I believe all of these have been addressed. Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)

Background

 * "Soon after the release" → "Shortly after the release"
 * Done.


 * "she had been working" → "Styrke had been working"
 * Done.


 * The source does not say it was only added to digital editions
 * Well it says it was added. A song can't be added to physical editions without the album being re-released, which it never was. The only versions of the album were issued before this song. I don't know how to cite the fact that it isn't on physical editions. Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Pipe chorus to Refrain
 * Since the guitar-heavy sentence essentially uses part of the same quote, why don't you paraphrase the second part to something like she had wanted to create a guitar-based song for a while?
 * Remove the comma after percussion
 * "She elaborated, "It's" → "Styrke elaborated that "it's"
 * "a bit sadder."" → "a bit sadder"." per MOS:QUOTE (this is not a full sentence in the source)'
 * All done! Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)

Release and reception

 * "Styrke told MyLondon that" → "Styrke told MyLondon,"
 * "In December 2018, she performed" → "In December 2018, Styrke performed"
 * ""Vibe" received general praise from" → ""Vibe" was met with general praise from"
 * "song showcased Styrke's" → "song showcases Styrke's"
 * Remove the introduction to Bands of Tomorrow
 * Add a space about December 2018's comma
 * "was critical of it in" → "was critical of the performance in"
 * Mention that "On the Low" and "Sway" were 2018 singles
 * "peaked at number ten" → "peaked at number 10" per MOS:NUM
 * Done and done! Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * Done.


 * There are not various citations to back up digital download and streaming
 * Source says "Also available in the iTunes Store". Should I include an additional source? Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice work here! --K. Peake 09:14, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! Appreciate it :) Pancake (talk) 19:22, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for going over this, however change electronic and pop to two separate genres in the infobox, add at least a vague part like "some of whom" after music critics to summarize something that was praised by at least a few and add citations from various countries retailers for digital download and streaming. --K. Peake 09:31, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Tried to summarize the reviews, let me know what you think. Genre and various retailers, done. Pancake (talk) 17:58, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I briefly copyedited but nice job! --K. Peake 20:17, 17 January 2023 (UTC)