Talk:Vibrion

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Vconstant. Peer reviewers: Jacob.stein, Aamleshi.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:40, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi! This was a very interesting article to read, and your contributions clearly made a significant improvement to the page. The only thing I might change is to try to incorporate the fact that Filippo Pacini coined the term "vibrion" earlier in the section rather than near the end of the paragraph. This would also allow it to fall under the 5th citation, since right now it's unclear what the source is for that being the first known use of the term. Overall, this seems like a really great contribution to the topic.

Jacob.stein (talk) 19:45, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

This article fills all of the criteria for a good wikipedia article in my option. It has the correct tone for the wiki, and also has abundant citations for every major point. A minor recommendation could be to link the first mention of diseases like cholera to their respective wikipedia page. Aamleshi (talk) 20:54, 6 May 2017 (UTC)