Talk:Vicky Jenson

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): FilmGirl. Peer reviewers: Bowie2016, MaggieCD.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 12:21, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Great article overall on Vicky Jenson. It is very informative in terms of her career. The 'Filmography' table is a great addition and benefits from good research. To improve the article I would suggest that you implement more summary or re-phrasing of information instead of direct quotations. For example : "...Family Tree, which "premiered at Sundance, screened at countless festivals, including Sundance, SXSW, Aspen and Malibu and went on to win multiple festival awards".[1]" could be said in your own words, considering the quote itself indicates that the short won awards that are referenced below. A hyperlink can be directed to the very good "Awards" table that you created below. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bowie2016 (talk • contribs) 03:49, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Well done article! I just polished up a couple things in reference to adding extra external links and adding year releases to some titles. Overall some of the wording however could use a little touch up but other than that it looks perfect. ! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.94.11.225 (talk) 19:32, 15 November 2016 (UTC)