Talk:Victor Bonney

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Introducing a quote by someone about the subject at the very first sentence of the article is poor writing, in my opinion. &#x222F; WBG converse 15:48, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Made it second sentence. It does set the article up nicely and Chamberlain is an authority. The whole lead is still too short actually. Philafrenzy (talk) 15:57, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * , thanks:-) Agree on the second point, wholly. &#x222F; WBG converse 16:08, 20 December 2018 (UTC)