Talk:Victoria Skating Rink/GA1

GA Review
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 * Comment. The format for dates needs much attention.  Grsz  talk  23:55, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I have updated the dates, and touched up some cites. Alaney2k (talk) 23:55, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Here's some more for you:
 * "rich, English, industrialists" - excessive commas.


 * Link Windsor Hotel.


 * Some "is"'s need changed to "was"'s in the Building section.


 * "An quote" → "A quote"


 * Some wikilinks missing, like Montreal Hockey Club, Nova Scotia.


 * When explaining the nine man limit, the fact that there were no substitutions could probably be added into the sentence rather than in parenthesis.


 * I understand the "slapshot north" reference in Location Today, but casual reader may not.


 * Section headers don't have two capitals per WP:MOS - Current Events and Location Today.


 * ISBN for other books?

Hope that helps.  Grsz  talk  19:58, 1 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Several of the books predate the ISBN system. I have put the ones in that do have them. Alaney2k (talk) 21:55, 1 October 2008 (UTC)


 * I think I have most of these things covered. I am going to check out a few books on Montreal history. Alaney2k (talk) 23:35, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I guess that's true, I wasn't sure.  Grsz  X  16:22, 2 October 2008 (UTC)