Talk:Victory Road (2008)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 09:31, 8 May 2014 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

First glance it looks good but there are some areas where I think it requires some improvements before GA status. Sources are good and picture licences are fine. Fix these issues and i'll take another look.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 09:31, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
 * "then-champion Samoa Joe", no need for then in there because he was champion at the time of the event. Same with LAX later in the intro
 * Fixed
 * "Victory Road is remembered for the closing of the 2008 TNA World X Cup Tournament." can we get a source for that in the intro?
 * Not really, just stating what happened at the event that was particularly memorable. Stating the obvious like a title change or a tournament.
 * "beheld", spacing
 * Fixed
 * link 2008 TNA World X Cup Tournament at first mention in the prose
 * I did, in the Background section.
 * "There were four teams each made up of four men, with each team representing a country" TNA is a country? Maybe something like a team representing TNA and three others representing a country
 * TNA always said their team represented the USA and that it was just called Team TNA to not sound confusing. In the past it was called Team USA. Changed anyway.
 * " Yoshino back-first onto the mat" Don't you mean pinned him?
 * He used his move first, then pinned him. It involves falling backwards. Shelley was laying on him afterwards so he could pin him as well.
 * Abyss is linked again in the Miscellaneous section, he only needs to be linked in the intro and first mention in prose
 * Fixed
 * "slamming his leg", a bit unclear as to what he did if you don't follow wrestling
 * Not really a way to make it clearer. He jumped off a 15 foot poll and did a leg drop on a dude hanging from cables. Dropped his leg sounds weird, hit Davari with his leg, etc.
 * Link "Willie Urbina"
 * No page exists.
 * "busted open", that's wrestling slang. I know what it means but others might not so reword and link it
 * Fixed
 * "flipping Sting off", again slang. "gave Sting The Finger" (or words to that effect) would be better
 * Fixed
 * If you're quoting wrestling slang, link it to the respective page so people not into wrestling understand
 * Fixed to the extent possible.
 * In the pictures, overlinking. If it comes after the first mention in prose, no need to link it again in the picture captions
 * I've always understood that photos are quick references and thus an exception to overlinking.
 * All issues taken care of.-- Will C  06:28, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Indeed so. A new GA is made.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 06:52, 11 May 2014 (UTC)