Talk:Victory Unintentional

Ambiguity
The sentence "They quickly retreat back to Earth." is ambiguous. Who retreats? The robots would go to Earth but they are not retreating. The Jovians may be retreating but not to Earth. Since the following sentence says "On return from the surface of planet Jupiter," not mentioning arrival at Earth the previous sentence is not even consistent with this one. I suggest deleting the ambiguous sentence. Zaslav (talk) 23:34, 3 March 2023 (UTC)