Talk:Video game–related health problems

This article has some good points, but it surely can be improved. The fact that it contains statistics makes this a strong article. It is better to have supporting evidence from studies than to just having statements. It is neatly organized with different topics in the contents as well: Musculoskeletal issues, vision problems, and video games and obesity. However, it would be a better article if there were more contexts stated. I feel like the topic sentences are great, but there are not much of commentaries. Also, it would be great if the statistics were in every content and further explanations on the studies. Stating the names of the people who performed the studies would make it even stronger. Overall, this is a great article to relate on my Argument essay. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2605:E000:8AD8:A00:30EA:793:1388:841 (talk) 05:50, 7 October 2015 (UTC)