Talk:Vijaya Tahilramani

Puffery
The writing style on this article is inappropriate and bordering on absurd: the lead contains the phrase, "sensational bribery case." I request an editor with more experience in copy-editing to please take a look. This may require additional reverification from sources, especially since this is a BLP. - Naushervan (talk) 15:56, 21 March 2022 (UTC)


 * I have since substantially reworked this article, ensuring that all claims are matched with adequate sources. I have removed one claim that suggests the subject was not prosecuted because of "judicial immunity" because I could find no source to support this claim, and moreover, no source to indicate that the investigation is even complete. If you have a source, please cite when reinstating the claim. - Naushervan (talk) 08:12, 4 April 2022 (UTC)