Talk:Viktoria Orsi Toth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:32, 8 March 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this one. MWright96 (talk) 20:32, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Early and personal life

 * "Orsi Toth played various sports including swimming," - add a wikilink for swimming to Swimming (sport)
 * "However, she hated running" - how about detested?
 * "She picked up indoor volleyball" - took up
 * "Orsi Toth credits Sirressi with making her fall in love with indoor volleyball," - become attracted to

Club

 * "She moved up from the youth leagues" - advanced

2011–2012: World Tour debut

 * "Orsi Toth concluded her first season on the World Tour ranked No. 89" - use the abbr template on No. to say that it means number
 * Wikilink forfeit to Forfeit (sports)

2013: Partnering with Menegatti

 * "Her breakthrough came mid-2013," - midway through 2013
 * "when national team coach Carvalho decided to split Cicolari and Menegatti" - when the national team coach decided to separate
 * "and paired Menegatti up with Orsi Toth instead." - just having paired Menegatti is sufficient
 * "With only five international events under their belt," - try not to use Idioms per MOS:IDIOM

2014–2015: First World Tour title

 * "Their results picked up in September" - got better

2018–present: Comeback

 * "In the group stage, they upset second-seeded" - they upset the
 * "and 15th-seeded Nina Betschart and Tanja Huberli of Switzerland" - and the 15th-seeded

Style of play

 * "and' right-handed right-side player." - and a
 * "and said that Orsi Toth keeps her grounded." - I am not so sure what is meant by the text in bold. Please clarify.