Talk:Vincent Zarrilli

Issues
One of the references,, is "pay to read". Also, the only sentence about the man, in the lead, is incomprehensible enough to not be repairable by someone who doesn't know what it means.

"...is a businessman who oversees cookware and pottery manufacturer..." - what does this even mean? Why aren't we told what his business is called? I could chop the last "r" off "manufacturer" to turn it into English, but it still would be less than uninformative. Huw Powell (talk) 02:42, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * I think I fixed the lead, at least. Huw Powell (talk) 03:09, 2 August 2012 (UTC)