Talk:Vincenzo Pirrotta

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Good start, needs more details in general and division of that content into appropriate categories. Be sure to review your article for grammatical issues and inconsistencies with the type set and font (i.e. going from italicized text to regular text in the same word). Don't add overly complicated jargon if you can help it as well; I can understand what you're saying, but would a 6th grader understand some of what you talk about? Keep up the good work, SEB2022 (talk) 03:14, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for this article on a notable academic. Note that you cannot use Wikipedia as a reference, as it's not considered a reliable source (see WP:CIRCULAR). I replaced this reference and used some other sources to expand his biography..

Spicy (talk) 09:28, 30 May 2020 (UTC)