Talk:Viola Canady

Peer Review
Yes, everything is neutral and relevant to the topic. There aren't over represented viewpoints but I think the article could be made longer by talking about her artwork. The citations are from reliable sources but I think there should be a separate citation for her working on the uniform for Douglas Macarthur. I'm not sure what is missing that should be added but the article is pretty short and I think if there is enough information it would be helpful to split the body into a few sections (for example: early career, daughters of dorcas and sons quilting guild, individual works etc.).

Alicecarlst (talk) 19:43, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: American Design Culture in the 20th Century
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Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 015-13, Writing for Others
— Assignment last updated by Joe Cesare (talk) 01:51, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Editing statement
I am planning on making changes and additions to this article. First, I plan on fixing the grammar mistakes that are present in this article and clean up the information that exists right now. As well, I am going to eliminate unsourced material by adding proper citations of the sources, for every sentence should have one. I plan on adding a brief lead section that will give a good overview of the article. This article is very short which is due to the lack of information and sources, so I plan on adding more reliable and scholarly sources to this article that will include detailed and more information on Viola Canady that will fill content gaps. Specifically, I plan on adding an early life section, career section, and add to the Daughter of Dorcas and Sons of Quilting Guid section as well as the biography section. I may get rid of the biography section, however, and make it into smaller sections such as career and early life. I plan on trying to add an individual works section as well if possible. These additions will create a clear structure to the article with balanced coverage that includes neutral content and reliable sources. Please see my annotated bibliography in the sandbox on the Wikipedia sandbox. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joe_Cesare/Viola_Canady/Bibliography?venotify=created Joe Cesare (talk) 13:06, 5 April 2023 (UTC)