Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Hi ! I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Copyedit
 * Here is my copyedit.


 * Prose & MOS
 * The acronym USVI is not mentioned anywhere in the article. Please define in the first use of United States Virgin Islands (USVI).
 * Need consistent linking with Ivan Espinosa. he is linked in the infobox, but not the first use in the lead. Recommend if linking, per WP:DUPLINK, to link in the infobox, first time in the lead, and the table at the end.
 * Cerebral palsy is linked twice. Recommend removing second link. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 17:03, 31 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Images
 * No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)


 * References
 * Reference 4 needs thew author Laura Hale.
 * Reference 5 needs "PARALYMPIC NEWS SERVICE" in the citation.
 * Reference 6 needs the author Andrew McGarry.
 * All other references look good. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Overall
 * Overall, similar to past articles. Looks good, will put on hold. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again,, have dealt with everything! Courcelles (talk) 18:15, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good! Passed. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 19:52, 2 September 2018 (UTC)