Talk:Virginia-class battleship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jackyd101 (talk · contribs) 22:30, 24 June 2015 (UTC)

Really nice article, just a brief hold to address a couple of small things.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:30, 24 June 2015 (UTC)


 * "victory in the Spanish-American War in 1898 before had a dramatic impact on battleship design" - before seems misplaced here.
 * Good catch, removed.
 * Wrong Albert Barker link
 * Yeah, I had forgotten to check that link.
 * Links seem arbitrary in first paragraph of service history - why are Pacific and Mediterranean linked but not Atlantic? If you are linking oceans, why not countries (or cities in those countries)? Be consistent.
 * A good point - they're probably not particularly high value links, so I've removed them. Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 00:32, 25 June 2015 (UTC)