Talk:Virginia Huget

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2018 and 6 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): SpoonyBuoy.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:44, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Lorenzo Peer Review
Hello SpoonyBuoy,

So far I think your article is not bad. I think its really cool that you're starting a new article from scratch. Overall I think you're off to a pretty good start. My advice for each section: Virginia Huget: Is this supposed to be the lead? If so, then I would maybe try to make it just a little bit longer, maybe include something about her most famous piece of work. Life: This needs a citation. Maybe spend a little time trying to connect each point, just so it doesn't sound like bullet points. Work: This section is good, just needs a citation. Work on other strips: Could this section be included in the Work section? Again, just need a citation and I think its pretty good. Overall, good start. LorenzoEdits (talk) 22:34, 10 November 2018 (UTC)LorenzoEdits

Joseph's Peer Review
Hello SpoonyBuoy,

I agree with the points made by Lorenzo, though I would also like to add a few things. Personally, I found the second sentence in the Life section to be a bit confusing. Maybe that part about the pronunciation doesn't need to be in the article. Second, more citations are probably needed throughout the article to showcase where this information came from and also to lead readers to where they can pursue further reading. Additionally, the lead, as Lorenzo stated, could be extended. Finally, perhaps include a style section. In said section, you could describe what her work looks like.

Great start!

- Joseph Cadden

Cadden Communications (talk) 20:50, 11 November 2018 (UTC)