Talk:Vision Australia Radio

Requesting Edit for Independent Review
HiLo48, I am querying a potential conflict of interest issue, though I may be over-reacting, as I am very new to Wikipedia editing. Looking at this talk page template created by the wizard, it appears that I should have requested my changes here before making them in the article, but I don't think they are drastic enough for it to matter that much. I am only concerned as I am a past volunteer for the not-for-profit organisation and radio network in question.

Changes Made

 * QUALITY: ensure short description actually makes sense by fixing typo.
 * QUALITY: Add Link to main vision Australia organisation in frontmatter.
 * FIX: Update Webcast link to something more up-to-date as the old MP3 .pls playlist no longer appears to work.
 * QUALITY: Clarify Victoria in Australia but without linking to the latter to hopefully avoid copyediting issues. Remove explicit reference to NSW to help avoid article imbalance and simply generally observe other states in Australia as this is more accurate.
 * QUALITY: remove internally linked popularly-identifiable references to newspapers and magazines to avoid over-linking.
 * FIX: Remove adjective “dedicated” with reference to employees as this creates too much bias towards entities affiliated with the Organisation running the station.
 * QUALITY: clarify Kooyong with internally-linked ref. Do the same for some of the mentioned disabilities.

Thanks in advance for any help.

Njsch (talk) 12:33, 17 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your contributions. Your edits look perfect. For my part, I don't consider a former volunteer for this not-for-profit precludes you from editing or requires a declaration/edit request each time you edit the page. Minor edits of this nature need not trouble you at all - you can just go ahead and do them. I also note it seems you are not subject to the paid editing disclosure requirement as a former volunteer. Given your former association, just be mindful of ensuring that your contributions are written in a neutral point of view. If you intend to (1) make changes that may sound promotional in tone, or (2) remove material that might be contentious, then you might seek assistance then. Thank you for editing and welcome to Wikipedia. Local Variable (talk) 14:14, 18 June 2022 (UTC)