Talk:Vittorio Mussolini

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"his second wife" ??? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 145.237.110.22 (talk) 06:14, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Potential confusion about article
I think that there is potential for some confusion when reading this article, especially with certain phrases such as this one:

"However, he was the first officially acknowledged son of Mussolini, with his second wife Rachele; his older half-brother was never officially acknowledged by Mussolini's fascist regime."

Does that mean that his older half-brother was never recognized by Mussolini himself? What does "officially recognized" mean in this context? I would guess that that might mean that his older half-brother was considered illegitimate, but I feel like it should be more clear about something like that. It could also potentially suggest that his older half-brother was somehow rejected by the regime and not specifically his father outright. I don't really have any information to verify whether either of those outcomes are true, but I think that what exactly that outcome is supposed to be should be clarified.

Also, I think that something like... 'While Vittorio Mussolini was the second son of Benito Mussolini, he was the first to be officially recognized,' might be more clear in this context.

Clovermoss (talk) 22:52, 16 September 2018 (UTC)