Talk:Vivien Lyra Blair/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 00:35, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

This is a short review, but the article is pretty short and practically ready. Reference cleanup and archival and verifying that this is all the personal life info we can get about Vivien are all that stand between this and a GA. 7-day hold to. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:57, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * The Early life and Personal life sections are very, very skimpy. Granted, she is young, so this may be the limit (I could not find a single freely licensed image, for instance). Is this all we can possibly get out of reliable sources on her personal life? The Career section is excellent; only one sentence doesn't have a citation invocation, and all the references are reliable and attributed reviews. This is the type of citation density I like to see on good BLPs, especially of minors.
 * I've been searching for a while, but I can't find anything from reliable sources. I have, however, merged the two sections in an attempt to make them less skimpy.

Other items

 * Earwig turns up some included quotes and a film title. No issues.
 * Run a date script to standardize reference dates (probably mdy) and archive references.
 * It looks like the page has been defended well from some contested editing issues.
 * It looks like the page has been defended well from some contested editing issues.

Responded to your comments Pamzeis (talk) 05:18, 22 August 2022 (UTC)