Talk:Vivo (Luis Miguel album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:32, 10 June 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * of the second leg of Amarte Es Un Placer Tour. → add "his" before the tour's title
 * in a live audio CD format, DVD, and VHS format → in a live audio CD, DVD and VHS format
 * were released as singles for the album → state "made available" here to avoid word repetition
 * On its release → After its release
 * link "critics" to Music journalism
 * Miguel received several accolades including a Grammy → comma before "including"
 * certified triple platinum+gold → certified triple Platinum and Gold

Infobox

 * You need a more appropriate alt text for the cover where you describe what the user can see in the picture given

Background and release

 * Place the audio sample on the left in the first paragraph
 * live covers of "Y" and "La Bikina". → specify that these are her singles
 * while the video album launched on → while the video album was launched on
 * It is first Spanish-language live album → place "the" before "first"
 * "La Bikina" was released as the lead single → say "was made available" here to avoid word repeition
 * with Mexican Independence Day → "the" before "Mexican..."
 * It peaked at two → you need to say "number two"

Critical reception

 * On its release, Vivo → After its release
 * state that the reviews were written by music critics and link them to Music journalism
 * Please link AllMusic to its respective article and fix "Allmusic" to AllMusic in the reviews box
 * and the mariachi songs. Torres concluded: "Miguel's → and the mariachi songs, concluding: "Miguel's
 * Year of release for MTV Unplugged in brackets
 * Same for El Alma al Aire
 * Same for Paulina

Commercial performance

 * Year of release for Mi Reflejo in brackets
 * platinum → Platinum
 * never shorten out United States to US; write "America" here to avoid word repetition
 * link Recording Industry Association of America
 * ninth bestselling → ninth best-selling
 * In Argentina, Vivo debuted on the top → In Argentina, Vivio debuted atop the
 * double platinum → double Platinum
 * while the video received platinum certification → while the video received a Platinum certification
 * triple platinum → triple Platinum
 * the album was certified triple platinum+gold → the record was awarded Platinum and Gold
 * a gold certification → a Gold certification

Track listing

 * flawless ;)

Charts

 * Fixed things here by myself

Certifications

 * flawless ;)

Personnel

 * Section should be placed before "Track listing"
 * Well, I think the section is not needed; I mean, there are only two credited persons which are already included in the article's body

Copy-violation

 * 21.3% is super!

Links

 * 1 problem here! Please fix!

Outcome
for 7 days! Great job, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:27, 10 June 2017 (UTC) Hey, I believe I've fixed all the issues you brought up. Just a couple things, I didn't understood what you meant by "specify that these are her singles". I assumed you meant to mention that both songs were released as singles from the album so I added that. Is the alt fine? I hard trouble coming up with a proper description so I did the best I could with it. And I agree with removing the personnel section. The only reason I made it a section is because I was hoping I could find the album booklet online, as I do not actually own it, and spot more personnels. But I couldn't find it so that's why I agree with your statement. Thanks for the review Cartoon network freak. If you ever need a Latin song article reviewed for GA, just let me know! Thanks again! Erick (talk) 20:13, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Great job and congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:50, 10 June 2017 (UTC)