Talk:Voestalpine/Archives/2013

Assessed as C class
Hi. I have assessed this article as C class in accordance with the article assessment guidelines. It is very nearly B class. In my opinion, to bring it to B class, it will require:
 * A lead section that summarises the key points of the article and properly explains why this company is notable
 * Appropriate supporting materials, such as illustrations or images

You may wish to also give consideration to the following issues, which are not required for B class but will be required for promotion to Good Article:
 * Consistent citation style, preferably using templates
 * A consistent level of citation, with all non-mundane facts sourced.
 * Elimination of redlinks for which you do not intend to create an article
 * Improvements to the writing style to remove or explain corporate, German, and steel industry jargon to make the article accessible for lay readers.
 * More information about the individuals involved in this topic - CEOs, et cetera
 * Removal of unencyclopedic and arguably POV language - "steel elite", "synergy of steel works", "bombed to the ground".

Many thanks. - DustFormsWords (talk) 07:05, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
 * No, thank YOU. I've stated my goals with the article, so I probably won't get involved with much of that. I'll tell those who are more knowledgeable about the company than I am. Vchimpanzee ·  talk  ·  contributions  · 19:50, 10 June 2010 (UTC)