Talk:Vojislav Lukačević/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:14, 2 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:14, 2 January 2013 (UTC)


 * by establishing modus vivendi or operating as; wouldn't "by establishing "a" modus vivendi "with" or operating as read better?
 * Have modified the sentence, I've not used "a" as the movement as a whole reached numerous different modus vivendi with the Axis at different times and places.
 * Isn't "committed atrocities" a bit weak? How about "massacred a number of Muslims"
 * Good point, fixed.
 * Missing comma after "town" German garrison commander of a nearby town but did not accept
 * Added.
 * Need place of publication for Roberts, Tomasevich, Milazzo
 * Added.
 * Pictures have appropriate licensing.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:23, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
 * All points above have been addressed I believe. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 00:35, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 01:44, 10 January 2013 (UTC)