Talk:Volodymyr Ivanovych Barvinok

I edited the page for grammar, missing articles, capitalization, etc. A few sentences are still a bit confusing, but I am not an expert on this topic, so I could not improve the clarity: Also, someone knowledgeable on the topic should consider dividing the article into sections. --MattMauler (talk) 23:57, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I am not sure what the sentence about the "old prints of Kiev and Moscow" means.
 * his "prominent work" - 'general survey of old prints in the libraries of Kiev' - should that be italicized? The markings right now are a bit confusing, but I do not know what they mean, so I did not want to remove them.