Talk:Volunteers of America

advertisement
This entire article reads like an advertisement.

Rewrite
128.135.73.105 (talk) 15:45, 20 June 2008 (UTC) - This entire article reads like an advertisement. It is unstructured according to Wikipedia's policy, and appears to have been copied and pasted, possibly from the organization's website. This pages needs a fundamental rewrite in order to comply with Wikipedia's quality standards.

Focus on Church
The Volunteers of America, like the Salvation Army, is both a service organization and a church. This entry needs further explanation of the VoA as a church: beliefs, governance and such.LAWinans (talk) 23:49, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to 4 one external links on Volunteers of America. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20060313224656/http://www1.salvationarmy.org:80/heritage.nsf/0/88c78ae770597106802568cd004a110c?OpenDocument to http://www1.salvationarmy.org/heritage.nsf/0/88c78ae770597106802568cd004a110c?OpenDocument
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20100102010035/http://philanthropy.com/stats/philanthropy400/ to http://philanthropy.com/stats/philanthropy400/
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20081204165438/http://www.housingfinance.com/ahf/articles/2007/may/TOPDEVELOPERS-1-0507.htm to http://www.housingfinance.com/ahf/articles/2007/may/TOPDEVELOPERS-1-0507.htm
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080517112149/http://www.housingfinance.com/ahf/articles/2008/may/AHF50TOPCOMPANIES0508.htm to http://www.housingfinance.com/ahf/articles/2008/may/AHF50TOPCOMPANIES0508.htm

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Substantial Edits Made
Hello Wikipedians, I have just made several edits and rewritten significant portions of this article in order to address the problems mentioned above. I believe the article no longer reads like an advertisement and is comparable to similar types of articles here on Wikipedia. I have also added several references and a section on Ministry. I would like to remove the flags at the top of the article based on these changes if there are no objections. Thank you! Rmlewinson (talk) 02:31, 9 May 2017 (UTC)