Talk:Voodoo (Oh Land song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 17:24, 17 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Picking this up for review. Aoba47 (talk) 17:24, 17 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Review
 * I am not sure if "taken from" is necessary; I think that "from" by itself is fine. This applies to the lead and the body of the article.
 * In the lead, I would link "digitally" to "digital download".
 * Would it be possible to combine these two sentences into one (The track was written by Nanna Øland Fabricius and Dan Carey; Carey also solely produced it). Maybe something like: (Nanna Øland Fabricius wrote the track in collaboration with its producer Dan Carey).
 * Link "Robyn" in the body of the article.
 * In the first two sentence of the "Background and composition" section, you repeat "album" a few times in close proximity so I would recommend revising to avoid repetition.
 * There is a stray parenthesis in this sentence: "It was recorded in 2010 at Carey's home studios in Streatham), while mixing occurred at Metropolis Studios in London".
 * Please link "chorus" and "refrain" in the "Background and composition" section.
 * I am not sure what is meant by "the boring tendencies". Would it be better to replace the phrase with "the trends".
 * I am not sure if the "work[s]" quote is necessary; I think paraphrasing may be better.
 * Please include Metropolis Studios in the infobox.
 * Could you specify who was making the comparisons to Rihanna?


 * Final comment
 * Great work with this. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 17:37, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
 * – I know how busy you are currently so thank you for taking time to review this. I completed addressing any issues. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 19:23, 17 August 2017 (UTC).
 * Thank you for addressing my comments. I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 19:31, 17 August 2017 (UTC)