Talk:Voyage of the Damned (Doctor Who)/GA1

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Rest looks good. Leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy (O) 06:18, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * "sabotages the ship shortly after the Titanic's collision with the TARDIS." --> "...shortly after its collision..." might read better.
 * "beaten only by the episode of EastEnders which aired immediately after the episode" - repetition of "episode"... and does the EastEnders ep. have a name?
 * Same in Broadcast section.
 * Showgirl (as in, the Kylie tour) shouldn't have italics.
 * The stuff in quotation marks in the Writing section needs direct citation.
 * They are group-referenced at the end.
 * Ref 25; reliable source?
 * "The organisation Christian Voice expressed offence at the religious imagery of a scene in which the Doctor is lifted through the ship by robot angels;" - I had to check the ref to find why it pissed them off (messiah portrayal), so you probably should say so somewhere.


 * With regards to ref 25; Yes, Outpost Gallifrey has a reliable reputation as a news aggregator in this field; they have press-access to various sources like BARB and the BBC. — Edokter  •  Talk  • 13:09, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

In order of points: Thanks, Sceptre (talk) 11:07, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * It has no name.
 * I'm not sure that citing every quote after the quotation mark in that section would be helpful - it could make it rather unreadable.
 * Ref 25 is a reliable source.
 * Done.