Talk:Vukovar massacre/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:01, 18 April 2015 (UTC)

Will do this one over the next week. Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 09:01, 18 April 2015 (UTC)


 * Sorry, ANZAC Day got in the way. Will get on with this now. Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 21:43, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
 * I suggest you use the two External links as sources, just to mention in the body that Bell did a BBC radio piece in 2011 (and add anything that he said that adds to the article), and mention that a Croat-Serb doco was made in 2006 and how it was received. Definitely worth adding. Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 22:10, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
 * No worries about the delay - RL interfered over here as well. I have removed the image pointed out above because there was an issue re Mrkšić licensing as well, so until there is something of substance, I trust the article is better off without the image. I have worked Bell's piece into the article, and removed the documentary from EL altogether because it appears to be tangentially relevant at best - it deals with the battle and the coverage appears to be limited to the battle and the city itself. On the other hand, there is a mention of the documentary in the battle article, and the doco coverage appears substantial enough to warrant at least a stub on the film - which might be a better venue for further elaboration on the issue. Thoughts?--Tomobe03 (talk) 10:25, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Agree. I'm happy with this now, passing. Regards, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 11:38, 7 May 2015 (UTC)