Talk:WBAA/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 19:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * The acronym for MIPM isn't used again in the lede  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:30, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Changed
 * It expanded to a second FM station in 1993 - considering we've already spoken about the FM station, this reads like we have three stations.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:30, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Changed
 * as part of an agreement between the institutions - well, it would have to be agreed. I don't think this actually says anything.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:30, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Changed to remove redundancy

General

 * "The Hot School Dinner",[14] "Home Canning of Meats", "Bread from Indiana Flour", and "Elimination of Smoke, Dust, and Fumes in Industrial Processes" - are these all proper nouns?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * These are the actual titles of the lectures given in the sources available.
 * remaining fraction - that's pretty hard maths, perhaps we should spell it out.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * FCC is introduced twice in the body.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * That's a typo, probably from muscle memory since I don't write too many stations of this age. Fixed so the first mention correctly reads (FRC) for the Federal Radio Commission.
 * From 1975 to 1976 - in 1975 and 1976.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Changed
 * last university radio station in the Big Ten - what's a Big Ten?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * A Big Ten Conference. Wikilinked. (There are now two links to this page in the article, but one uses an older name.)
 * The sale was finalized on July 1, 2022 - bit weird for a para.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Merged into the preceding paragraph.
 * Merged into the preceding paragraph.

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 19:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

Addressed or responded to all items. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 20:13, 16 October 2022 (UTC)